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I been super busy with life and work, so sorry for the long hiatus.

Here are some projects I am working on. (Warning, list is subjected to change)

One shot Hulk-Outs (vote winners) :

- Midori
- Becky
- Vivian

One shot Transformations:

- AP Girl
- AP Girl
- AP Girl
- Wonder Girl
- Mei Lin
- Wendy
- Tara
- Bonnie

Hulk-Out Madness:
- Carrie
- Helayne
- Peach
- Doris

Gift for personal Friends (No exact date, but will be done this year)

:icondragonfly177:

:iconstrangerataru:

:iconsephzero:

:iconlonebeatle:

:iconcaptstar1:

:iconsparky597:

  • Listening to: http://www.youtube.com/user/SgtHouse?feature=mhum#
  • Drinking: Diet Pepsi
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The Savage Hulk Girl Part 1b

by Channeleven and SHFan

Carrie hid in the gamma chamber. All she could do now was watch Helayne as she waited for the monster to break into the room. Soon enough, the monster breaks in and slowly approaches Helayne, who remains where she is, unfazed. While admiring her bravery, Carrie turns away in fear as the monster prepares to kill her new found friend.

Staring down the creature, Helayne delivered a faint growl as her brown eyes slowly turn emerald green. She balls her fists and clenches her teeth, readying herself for a startling metamorphosis. Her muscles immediately tensed up and began to grow. Her white tank-top slowly molded to her upper body and her white heels and yellow skirt strained against the rest of her body. Her black hair began to grow down towards her hips, becoming more unruly and gaining mint green highlights. Her chocolate brown skin began to change, switching to a dark beige color and then an emerald green color. Her tank top quickly shrunk in size as the bottom of her top creeped upward revealing her now new firmly tight abs. Her B size cups grew into Double D’s so fast that her tank top exploded into several ripped and ragged pieces. Thankfully (for modesty), Helayne was wearing her white sports bra underneath as it stretches and adjusted her new breast size. Next her thigh and legs started to show their athletic tone as she started to flexes her legs, causing the side stitching of her skirt to pop and rip. Her green tone thigh started to budge and rip out of her flimsy yellow skirt until the remains of the skirt barely coverers her more sensitive areas. Finally, her feet showed signs that they were about to erupt out of her heels. The white leather and soles broke and tear away from the glue and stitching as her green toes burst out between them. The front leather crept up above the top of her foot until it stretched to its limit and rip down the middle. Her entire body when into one massive growth spirt as the 5’.6” Helayne Williams turns into the 7ft.beautful emerald amazon Ultimate She Hulk.

Now more than ready to fight back, the She-Hulk tackles the monster head on; however this was a mistake as her part as she quickly realized that her punches and kicks were having no effect on it. Suddenly, the blobs skin catches her left fist as it started to slowly pull her in. Struggling and fighting back, the She-Hulk could not pull her fist away as she started to hurt. It was the creature’s acidic goo and it was started to eat away at her skin. Luckily her skin was resilient, but it was a matter of time before she knew the worse.

 

Meanwhile in the sound proof chamber, Carrie was sitting on the floor holding her knees close to her chest thinking of the worse for her and her friend outside. She wish she could of done something, something to help instead of Helanye sacrificing herself to save her.  Then something caught Carries eye as she looked up to see parts of the blob splatted across the chambers windows. Curious, Carrie stood up only to be in shock to see that there are now two creatures battling outside.

 

“Wait…is, that…Oh my god! It is! It’s the She-Hulk!” Carrie screamed with glee.

 

 

 

Normally a person would have a opposite reaction or worse, faint. Carrie instead has been a longtime fan. Ever since noticed by the public a few years ago, the She-Hulk is a wanted fugitive for mass destruction and questionable murders of criminals. However there are some who think she is a hero. Carrie is one of those people who think that the She-Hulk is a hero, and has a massive crush on her.     

 

Meanwhile, outside the chamber, the She-Hulk was able to remove her trapped fist and was healing quickly thanks to her super powered abilities. She stood her groud and the creature was reforming and rearing back ready to strike. But she was ready for him this time as she slams her hands together causing a massive shockwave into the creature causing it to explode and rain down every were within the room. The She-Hulk was no exception as parts of the goo was on her body. Winching in pain, the goo burn and disintegrate leaving burn marks on her skin and damage to her remaining clothing. She was able to knock one of the goo off her right shoulder before it can do any major damage to her.

 

“Ugh, I just bought this outfit!”

 

She said in anger as she tore the skirt off her due to having the most damage, revealing her very tight and damage pink stripe panties. She looked over, only to be in shocked as she noticed Carrie taking a picture of her on her cell phone. She-Hulk could only growl in anger as she knows that she has to smash that phone once she lets her friend out of the chamber.

 

“Yes, yes, yes! I got the money shot! Dam she is so sexy and taller than the stories say.”

 

Carrie said to herself as she was going all fan girl in the chamber then realized something.

 

“Wait, what do I say when she lets me out of here? Should I kiss her and say thank you? Say thank you then kiss her? Should I ask her out?”

 

Outside the chamber the She-Hulk can see that Carrie was acting wired and talking to herself with joy, causing her to have second thoughts of letting her out.

 

While both women are distracted, the goo that covered the room started to burn and fade away leaving damage marks all over the room. But there was one goo piace that has not burn or disintegrated away. Instead it started to glow into neon green color and come alive. Knowing it cannot take on the green woman, it instead decides to go after the girl that was trapped inside the chamber. Leaping pass the She-Hulk, it goes into the control panels, eating and destroying its way into the chamber unnoticed.

Back in the machine, Carrie notices an odd brining smell and sounds coming the walls. As she turns to noticed, she sees the goo squeezing and pouring out of the wall.

 

"What the hell...?" Carrie says, as she slowly backs into a wall opposite from the goo.

 

 

 

The She-Hulk notices the goo inside the chamber and heads over to the chamber door. The door was badly damage from the goo exploding earlier making it impossible to open. This did not stop the She –Hulk as knew she can easily open the door. However as she tries to rip the door open, a sudden and incredible pain shot from her shoulder and sudden weakness washed over her. It was the goo she knocked off earlier. It left a nasty open wound that did not quite healed yet.

 

At this time, the chamber starts up as alarms and a computer voice comes over the loud speakers.

 

“Warning, Gamma burst testing in 60 seconds”

 

“Oh no!”

 

The She-Hulk tries her best to rip the door open, but it was no use. No matter how hard she tried, she could not get it to open. It was only a matter of time before the Carrie was going to be killed by the creature. Then then looked over by the control panel, since her strength cannot save a life, maybe her mind will. So she rushed over and looked at the controls.

 

“Shit!”

The She-Hulk’s hart sank as parts the control panels the override the system where damaged beyond repair. By this time she looked up to see in horror that Carrie was now covered with the neon goo as it was starting to down her and eating away at her skin. With no choice, the only thing she can do to save Carrie is hopes to burn the curter to death and kill her friend at the same time.

 

“God, please save her.”

 

The She-Hulk started to set the dials at dangerous levels, hoping it will be enough. The computer did its final countdown as the chamber admitted a bright green light and causing both Carrie and the goo in turmoil pain. Even though she could not hear it, she can see that Carrie was screaming as the goo started to shrink and fade away.

 

“Just a few more seconds….”

 

Suddenly the fuse boxes that where damage give way into shorts and exploding sparks as the chamber shuts down and the emergency lights kick on. There the goo started to absorbed into Carries skin causing her to body to shake violently and then, go lifeless.

 

The She-Hulk stood there in horror as she witness a innocent young woman die right in front of her.  

 

“No….oh god…no…no…NO…NOOOOOO!”

 

The She-Hulk screamed as started to go into a violent outburst of anger.

 

“Just a few more seconds I could have saved her!”

 

With her anger hitting the breaking point, her body started to change again. This time her muscles started to grow larger, her body growing taller, her facial features changing into more of a savage look and tone. Her white sports bra was reaching its limit as the She-Hulk frame was just too much for it and snaps and rip away as her breasts bounce freely into the air. Her panties, incredibly still hold on as it looked more like a G-String at this point.

 

Her mind was slipping into darkness as Helaynes intelligence started to fade and more of the savage creature insider taking over.  

 

“SHE-HULK COULD NOT SAVE GIRL! SHE-HULK SMASH STUPID MACHINE!”

 

She screamed as she started to rip and tear away the room with raging force.

 

Meanwhile, within the chamber, the young woman’s lifless body suddenly comes to life with a gasping of air. Coughing and trying to control her breathing, Carrie tries to get her bearings and surroundings.

 

“I…I am alive? How?

 

Carrie gets up to look over her body and notices that both her skin and clothing that where damage and eaten by the goo where restored and healed like it never even happened. Carrie was confused, but lucky to be alive. But then before she can turn around to see the savage like hulk behind her tearing up the room, Carrie begins to feel hot.

 

"Oh god, what's going on? How did it get so hot in here- AGH!"

 

Carrie felt an intense pain in her body, forcing her to the ground. She begins to breathe heavily as her glasses fall over her face and landing on the floor next to her. Her light brown eyes begin to turn green as her blurry vision started to become clear and crisp. Carrie twitches in pain as she begins to go through a transformation just like Helayne did. Her purple tank-top, denim jeans and white sneakers strained against her body as her muscle mass heavily increased. Her raven black hair began to darken and gain dark green highlights as it grew just slightly past her shoulders. Her tank-top shrunken around her upper body as she can feel both her bra and top getting uncomfortably tight to the point that she grabbed the shirts collar and force her top to rip open.  Her B-size bra could not contain her newly developed C size breasts as it just pop and busted off of her body spilling freely into the air. Her body changed into a petite frame into an Olympic gymnast’s body as she gained a solid four-pack. Her jeans split along her legs as her well tone legs and thighs began to show and slowly changing her skin tone from peach into a green hue. Her belt, zipper and button all busted off at once as her torn up pants dropped to the floor as only her white panties remained on her. The laces of her sneakers started too busted off one by one as they gradually became tighter, giving Carrie severe discomfort. Growling, she stomps down with her left foot, causing her sneaker to bust off. The other sneaker broke off within time. The rest of her skin changed into an emerald green as 5’.2” Carrie Rice becomes the 6 foot tall Savage Hulk-Girl!



Carrie snaps out of the shock she went through during the transformation.

 

"Ugh... what happened...?"

 

She says as she moves to wipe the sweat off of her forehead, only to shriek at the sight of her now giant green hand.

 

"W-what the!?"

 

Carrie says. She looks down and she sees her newly changed body. Carrie is filled with shock, but soon, the shock turns to rage as she balls her fists, growling. She throws her fists into the doors of the chamber. After some smashing, she busts out of the chamber. All she wants to do now is take her rage out on something, and the first thing she sees is the She-Hulk monster Instead of reasoning, her savage side starts to take over. As carries intelligence starts to fade out as rage and anger sets in its place.

 

"That blob... it's the reason I was sent into the chamber... it's the reason I became this monster... IT'S GOING TO PAY!!!"

 

Hulk-Girl begins to mercilessly attack the monster with furious punches to her face. However, the Monster easily smacks Hulk-Girl away with ease causing her to crash into the solid metal wall, leaving a body size dent. This did not stop Hulk-Girl as she charges at the monster head on again with raging punches and blows as the monster just blocks the blows with ease. The Savage She-Hulk was confused, she never seen another hulk like her and does not understand why she is attacking her.

 

“ONCE I KILL YOU, I WILL SAVE MY RIEND HELAYNE!”

 

The monster suddenly snaps as she understands what is going on, causing Helayens intelligence to slowly return. The monster once again hits Hulk-Girl into a wall and quickly rips a beam off the wall behind her and using it to pin Hulk –Girl down before she can attack again. In a daze, Hulk-Girl does not see that the monster was changing back to the She-Hulk.

 

“Carrie, is that…you?”

 

Hulk-Girl snaps out of her daze and looks at the green woman holding her down.

 

“She-Hulk?” Hulk-girl said in confusion. “Where is that monster? Where is Helayne?”

 

“It’s okay. The monster is gone and she is safe.”

 

“Thank god…she is…safe” Said Carrie, as she feels her rage sedate. She eventually begins to return to normal, and she collapses as Helayne approaches her.

 


Later, Carrie slowly awakens to find she's back in her room.

 

"Wow, now that was a crazy dream." She said as Carrie gets up, only to get shocked when she seeing Helayne in her room wearing only an overlarge white t-shirt.

 

"Wait, what happened to-"

 

"Long story."

 

"Uh, what're you doing in my room? What's going on?" Asked Carrie.

 

"It's complicated." Says Helayne. "We were ambushed by a blob-like creature, and I had you hide in a gamma chamber so you could be protected. For you see, I have the power of the Hulk. Unfortunately, while I was fighting the creature, parts of it it flung into the chamber controls and, well, you became a creature like me."

Carrie can't help but to slightly chuckle at this. "A blob like creature? Hulk powers? That's crazy."

 

Knowing that Carrie wouldn't believe her, Helayne triggers her transformation once again and changes in front of Carrie. The oversize shirt was undamaged as it barely fit around her body with exposing blue panties underneath.

 

"Oh my god!"

 

"That's right, and you have the same power as I do." Said Helayne. "I could help you through this. I could train you to control your powers."

 

Carrie was hesitant. "I don't know... I just don't seem like the hero type."

 

"Sorry honey, but now you have to be. I could use the extra help around the lab, and, uh... I haven't found a way to reverse the transformation."

 

Carrie sighs. "Alright. At least I have someone to confide in. But, I've got a question."

 

"Shoot."

 

"How did you become a hulk?"

Helayne sighs. "It happened at my lab. I received a foreign compound and I wanted to tap into its power, learn more about it. Unfortunately, I underestimated the very toxicity of the compound, and as I opened it, my body was assaulted by its energy. I was fine after the exposure, but soon enough, I'd learn the hard way that it wasn't the case."

 

Helayne stroked her hair. "I was teaching a class, and one of my students was acting very disruptive, his behavior drove me to the breaking point and, well, here I am, big, green, etc."

She looked at Carrie.

 

"I... I shouldn't have put you into the chamber! This is all my fault!" Helayne screamed as a tear escaped from her eye. Carrie placed her hand on Helayne's shoulder.

 

"No. We had nowhere else to run. If I stayed out in the open, I would've been killed. It's better to be a hulking green monster than dead."

 

Helayne felt reassured. "I'd be more than happy to work with you and adjust to my powers."

"Great." Said Helayne, who was slowly beginning to return to normal.

 

Carrie gives her a pair of jeans and brown flip flops. "Huh, saves me the question." she says, as she puts them on.

 

"Well, I'll leave you be for now. Let's meet tomorrow to go over our powers more."

 

"Sure thing." Carrie says, as Helayne gets up and prepares to leave.

 

"Wait, one more thing." Carrie says.

 

"What is it?"

 

"How did you know where I lived?"

 

"I found your wallet in your ruined jeans, duh?" Says Helayne as she beams a smile at her.

The flashback ends as Carrie sets down the picture. She smiles, feeling grateful for having a friend who could help her through her curse.

 

"I may never feel 100% human again, but at least I know someone who shares that feeling."

 


-End

 

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I been super busy with life and work, so sorry for the long hiatus.

Here are some projects I am working on. (Warning, list is subjected to change)

One shot Hulk-Outs (vote winners) :

- Midori
- Becky
- Vivian

One shot Transformations:

- AP Girl
- AP Girl
- AP Girl
- Wonder Girl
- Mei Lin
- Wendy
- Tara
- Bonnie

Hulk-Out Madness:
- Carrie
- Helayne
- Peach
- Doris

Gift for personal Friends (No exact date, but will be done this year)

:icondragonfly177:

:iconstrangerataru:

:iconsephzero:

:iconlonebeatle:

:iconcaptstar1:

:iconsparky597:

  • Listening to: http://www.youtube.com/user/SgtHouse?feature=mhum#
  • Drinking: Diet Pepsi

Is my artwork good enough to start doing paid commissions? 

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39 deviants said Yes, it is good enough!
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7 deviants said No, your artwork is not that good.

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